LinkedIn Job Announcement Post

LinkedInEnthusiastic ToneTone Shift

Before (Original)

I am thrilled to announce that I have accepted a position as Head of Product at Nexova. This is an exciting new chapter in my career journey and I am grateful for this opportunity. I look forward to contributing to the team and continuing to grow professionally. Thank you to everyone who has supported me along the way.

After (TextGlow Rewrite)Enthusiastic

Starting Monday as Head of Product at Nexova. I spent the last six years building payments infrastructure that most people never think about but use every day. I want to apply that systems thinking to something people feel directly. Nexova is doing that — healthcare scheduling that actually works for patients, not just administrators. Six months ago this felt impossible. Grateful for everyone who helped me see otherwise. Let's build something useful.

What Changed

1Led with what makes this role personally meaningful rather than just announcing the title
2Told a brief, honest story (six years, six months ago) that makes the achievement feel earned
3Ended with a forward-looking line that invites engagement instead of generic thanks